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"Broken" by macmuelli "Broken" by macmuelli
A design i had made the last few days. Include a little introduce. Sorry for the bad gramma and all typos.



„BROKEN“


Caldari Tech II Heavy assault battlecruiser.

Special role: Covert cloaking device
- 100% damage bonus (similar to T II bs and can only fit 4 launchers)

length: 430 m
high: 101 m
width: 227 m


Introduce:

Years ago, there lived a scientist called „Erienne Takama“.
His previous interest was inventing warmachines. He was one of the best, and unique, in his job.
Then, there was the day, he didnt go to his job anymore. A call wasent sucessfull, and he was not present at home.
2 weeks later , he was found in one of his holiday houses.

-Dead-

But he was not the only one, who was there. A girl too, unknown for this moment, but it looked as if he had killed her.
His hands comprised a sword. An old pieces from the past of his Famely. It was given from generation to generation, and serveral hundret years old.
He has make a suicide with it.
A letter was found, where he had tryed to explained it.

It looked that he start working similar on his actual job, on a privat project. Which kind is unknown till today, but it was stolen by the girl death beside him.

If distrust conquered your minds..... and u think …...the love she gave... isnt realy true. If u look inside her eyes..... she smiled.......but at least u didnt know the real person behind it.
If u invest to get a real view, and hires peoples to get informations.

Thats Sick.

But at least i was right, she had stolen informations about my new project. Sold it …. Sold my trust for some f... uped isk`s.
She came back at home, gaved me a kiss and a smile.

In this moment..... I was „Broken“.

To honour the work he had done in the past, they called the ship „Broken“. His last word, and symbolic what distrust can do with a human. It came non visible, and if its close enough, it turns the full force on u.
The ship looks like the grasp of his sword.


Breg

Mac

Ps:There are so many beautifull concept`s and real art.
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:iconamaunator:
amaunator Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010
pretty average.
and who the hell would want to fly a ship named "Broken" ?!
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:iconmonsterrhino:
MonsterRhino Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
minmatar pilots :D
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi,

The bonus for the winner ship (setted by CCP ) will show, how much peoples will fly it.
The name will be unimportant then.

If u dont wanne fly a ship, only because u dont like the name, u will probally loose some game experience.


breg mac
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:iconcelestialsword:
CelestialSword Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
OK, I love this design, very good solid idea. One problem - it looks nothing like a sub-capitol ship. This could be a Next gen titan if anything. There is no way this is anything smaller. I would also love to see this ingame!
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sketchgoatee Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
Great ship, really fits well into the EVE universe, and I would surely run like hell if I saw one of those in red anywhere in the same system as me...

Good luck dude (though I'd re-submit with measurements in the pic to be contest legal).

:{>
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank u,

I ve added the measurements to the picture and updated it.
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:iconagamonkat:
AgamonKat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
This is a great model!
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cinema 4d, Polycount 1.7 mio / 7 ships ( full scene), cinema 4d render engine
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:iconrichardas:
Richardas Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea, something wrong here. Witch 3D package you use? Polycount? Render Engine? :ignore:
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:iconjuuge:
juuge Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Nice
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:iconbingokongen:
Bingokongen Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Cool looking ship!
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:iconaxel-vindislaga:
Axel-Vindislaga Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
I think it's stolen due to the difference between the text and design quality.
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I ve modell this ship by my self. Not stolen from somewhere else. If it looks comparable to something else, plz show it.

Dont seed bad thoughts only with , What u think!.

My native language is german. English- gramma isnt the best.

breg

mac
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:iconfuriousangel113:
Furiousangel113 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Right, um. Back to the drawing board...

Damn nice model dude.
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank u all for the feedback and your positve comments.

I ve rendered a close up with an 1.8 m sized men to have a look at the dimensions.

[link]

it should be right yet.
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:iconitburnes:
itburnes Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Interface Designer
if it doesn't win....<evil grin>....bloody Brilliant concept!
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi Zendoran. U brought me to check up the size again.

I ve booled all objects together and reduced it similar to this size.

X: 430 m
y: 101 m
z: 227 m

So u right, and the dimensions are a bit diffrent then i wrote inside the first post.

Fixed it now.
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:iconzendorea:
Zendorea Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
If this is your final submission it will be disqualified as it does not have the dimensions inside the graphic its self.
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:iconsonic-fan84062:
sonic-fan84062 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
uhhhhh.....what?????
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:iconzendorea:
Zendorea Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
Only 6mo???
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:iconsonic-fan84062:
sonic-fan84062 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
??? *has absolutely no idea what your saying*
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:iconzendorea:
Zendorea Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
sorry.... you need to add the measurement of the ship within the picture its self.....

CCP and DA will not take measurement that are notated in the description only you will need to add them to the actual submission.
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Renegades0ul Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i do realy like this one... the only problem i have with it is that it looks SO much bigger then 430m ... id have given it Battle ship to Dreadnought size at a first glance...
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:iconshunterx2x:
shunterx2x Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
thats nuts loves it that is DEFO! the CALDARI race lol
\o/
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:iconhrothgar-doran:
Hrothgar-Doran Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
Pretty effing sick man. Would so fly it.
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:icont0mpi:
t0mpi Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
This the nicest in the concepts, it have many of details. Congrat, good mesh Mac!
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:iconjianhan111:
jianhan111 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
ARGHHH there goes my chance of being int he top 15 even.. o well, dont even know if i should try
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:iconpeace-tank:
Peace-Tank Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
BRAVO!

I can tell you play eve, and you've got the style down pat.

Good job! This is one of only two good entries Ive seen so far!
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:iconsottan:
sottan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
jizz...
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
atm i use cinema 4d to model ships.
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:icontorch2005:
torch2005 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
yeah... that's gonna win...
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:iconcruzcontroll372:
Cruzcontroll372 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
what program do you use?
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:iconboxghost102:
Boxghost102 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Writer
so awesome you should make a TV series about it
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:iconextraxi:
Extraxi Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
CCP WILL show interest in this! Exceptional design.
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:iconxisaword:
XISAWORD Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovley ship, and from a true eve player, i think thats gona make all teh difference when CCP come to look at them
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:iconsonic-fan84062:
sonic-fan84062 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
well i was gonna enter but now im not sure since i don't have a 3d graphics thing and their no way in hell your gonna lose this contest
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:iconrqalucard:
RQAlucard Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010   Photographer
Crap, there go my chances of winning this contest...
Damn nice ship
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:icondeathwray:
Deathwray Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
Nice details. I love Caldari design.
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:iconjavelin-06:
Javelin-06 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
Very sexy. Nice job.
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ps: but adding a modul like a lockbreaker would be cool as an extra bonus
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:iconmacmuelli:
macmuelli Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No this would be overpowered. But u would be able to come closer to your target.
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:iconforte805:
forte805 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
nice design, do u mean that this can fire while cloaked when u state the 100% damage bonus?
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